And still he said:
I love you
I love you
I love you.
Shut Up! I yelled
I ordered him back to his grave.
He stood straight and tall,
His body challenging my determination
But his ebony eyes betrayed his hurt.
I met his gaze, as much as I wanted to look away.
Finally his eyes dropped and he walked towards the door.
But before he left, he looked at me, his eyes piercing my soul and said:
I love you
I love you
I love you.
I turned away,
I couldn’t handle his gaze,
But,
He’s the blood-sucking monster,
So why am I the heartless one?
><" why is this so good.
ReplyDeleteis this part of something larger or a stand alone? (if there's more, I WANT TO READ IT) =] <3
Right now it's stand alone, but I think I need a beginning. What do you think?
ReplyDeleteit's really good, i especially like how while the guy could be literally heartless, figuratively, the girl (or other guy, it could be either haha) is displayed as the 'heartless' one =]
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